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"단 하나뿐인 사랑"과 "풍성한 햇볕" 생각에 젖으며...

zik 2011. 1. 10. 07:13

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It's thoughts -- and just one Heart --

"단 하나뿐인 사랑"과 "풍성한 햇볕" 생각에 젖으며...

 

       by Emily Dickinson (1830-1886)

      (부분)역(transl.): 김종인(Zong-in Kim)

 

 

“단 하나 뿐인 사랑1)“과

“풍성한 햇볕” 생각에 젖으며

 

짠돌이 사랑

원 없이 펼쳐본다...

 

연휴기간임 두셋(씩)

모여 즐기다

 

성례전 같은 땐

큰 무리 이루며...

It's thoughts -- and just one Heart --

And Old Sunshine -- about --

Make frugal -- ones -- Content --

And two or three -- for Company --

Upon a Holiday --

Crowded -- as Sacrament --

 

식구들 한참 건드리지 않으려면

(홀로) 책 읽기에/

 

화랑 가까이 하기 너무 힘들 땐

원한다면 그림감상에/

Books -- when the Unit --

Spare the Tenant -- long eno' --

A Picture -- if it Care --

Itself -- a Gallery too rare --

For needing more --

 

눈 내리는 날

눈 둘 곳 마땅찮으면 2)에/

 

겨울임 (마당)모닥불 피우며

물떼새 해맑은 목청에 빠질 수도...

Flowers -- to keep the Eyes -- from going awkward --

When it snows --

A Bird -- if they -- prefer --

Though Winter fire -- sing clear as Plover --

To our -- ear --

 

A Landscape -- not so great

To suffocate the Eye --

A Hill -- perhaps --

Perhaps -- the profile of a Mill

Turned by the Wind --

Tho' such -- are luxuries --

 

It's thoughts -- and just two Heart --

And Heaven -- about --

At least -- a Counterfeit --

We would not have Correct --

And Immortality -- can be almost --

Not quite -- Content --

 

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※ It's thoughts -- and just one Heart - A poem by ... - American Poems

www.americanpoems.com/.../104...

 

----(Notes):

1): Heart. (cf.): dear(est) heart.

 

2): Winter Flowers:

African Violet Plants/ Amaryllis Flower/ Cape Primrose/ Christmas Cactus Plant/ Christmas Rose/ Coralberry/ Crocus in the Snow/ Cyclamen/ Flowering Maple/ Glory of the Snow/ Jasmine Plant/ Kaffir Lily/ Kalanchoe Plant/ Lady Slipper Orchids/ Moth Orchid/ Poinsettia Plants/ Primrose Flower/ Snowdrop Flower/ Squill/ Winter Aconite/ Witch Hazel ...

 

Old: Eternal; infinite; everlasting.

(http://edl.byu.edu/lexicon/term/208986)

 

awkward: Uncomfortable; insecure; out of place; ill at ease.

(http://edl.byu.edu/lexicon/term/208322)

 

"And Old Sunshine--about--

Make frugal--Ones--Content--

And two or three--for Company": --> 

And Old Sunshine--about--[oneself]

[That] Make frugal--Ones--[feel] Content--

And [it's] two or three [hearts]--for Company (-John Schmit)

(Elision, Recoverability, and Insertion in Emily Dickinson's Poetry (1993))

 

----(코멘트1):

.... The last stanza has a surprise ending. It begins predictably enough: while a single heart can be “content” with just thoughts and sunshine, two hearts—lovers—need only themselves and their thoughts to experience heaven—or ...

-Susan Kornfeld (Tuesday, October 30, 2012)

 

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※ the prowling Bee: It's thoughts—and just one Heart—

bloggingdickinson.blogspot.com/...

 

----(코멘트2):

.... Even in such a poem, I find that Dickinson shows a trace of doubt about contentment. It would seem that she believed that true contentment was to be obtained only after death. ...

-山津 かおり (Yamatsu Kaori)

 

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※ CiNii 論文 - エミリー・ディキンソンの「断念」について

ci.nii.ac.jp/naid/110007138654

 

----(해설1):

.... "It's thoughts - and just one Heart - " (p 495) reinforces this sense of the adequacy of modest domestic pleasures, just as the speaker of "Although I put ...

-Jane Donahue Eberwein

 

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※ Dickinson: Strategies of Limitation - Google 도서 검색결과 (p. 115)

books.google.co.kr/books?isbn=0870235494...

 

----(해설2):

.... Emily lists the needs for contentment of the frugal one Heart," presumably an unmarried person: sunshine, two or three friends on a holiday, a book when housework is done, possibly a picture which can be as sustaining as a whole Gallery, flowers to look at, the ...

(www.emilydickinsonpoems.org/Emily_Dickinson_commentary.pdf)